Like how fun it was and what you think about it
And if you think it is a safe place or a bad place for
Family's and schools. I picked that it is a safe place...
So firstly at the start is the opening then... There is the intermediate then there is the end.
Walt: wirte a persuasive argument.
Here is my wirting...
I think that I did well at this.
I immediately looked up gazing into the sunlight thinking I can agree with it...
El Rancho is a safe and friendly place were you can ride horses. Some of these activities will became a passion to you. I agree it is a safe and friendly place that is a harmless place to be.
El rancho is awesome and the activities are very safe. There are safety instructors that are there to help and look after you and everyone else.
There are safety lines and teachers and parents and rules to help it be safe all of these things are to help there camp safe.
Next... The cabins are a safe and friendly place too. You can sleep in there and they are really really comfortable. I really want to sleep on that bed right now. You can do things in there like get dressed and unpack, but better yet they are bunk beds. Some of the people come in and check on you.
I have provided efficient evidence that El Rancho is a safe and friendly place.
I know I am going to El rancho again.
Feed back: it is good I think you should work on getting more details.