Wednesday, 13 April 2016
WALT: make advertisement
we had to make a advertisement.
it is about convincing people to come to there shop or bye there things or food.
i think that i did good at because there is an advertisement on my blog.
feedback i think that you did well at your blog post because you have everthing that you need on there.
Thursday, 7 April 2016
Walt: make two stars and a wish
we had to make two stars and a wish
the stars mean what you have achieved in learning time
and wish means what you need to work on.
I think I did well at my two stars and a wish.
feed back: I think that you did well.
Feedfroward I think that you need to work on getting the words more clear on the pic collage.