Wednesday, 23 March 2016

El rancho camp writing

So we have been wirting about El rancho camp.
Like how fun it was and what you think about it 
And if you think it is a safe place or a bad place for 
Family's and schools. I picked that it is a safe place...
So firstly at the start is the opening then... There is the intermediate then there is the end.

Walt: wirte a persuasive argument.

Here is my wirting...


I think that I did well at this.




 Part 1.  

I immediately looked up gazing into the sunlight thinking I can agree with it...
El Rancho is a safe and friendly place were you can ride horses. Some of these activities will became a passion to you. I agree it is a safe and friendly place that is a harmless place to be.

Part 2.

El rancho is awesome and the activities are very safe. There are safety instructors that are there to help and look after you and everyone else.
There are safety lines and teachers and parents and rules to help it be safe all of these things are to help there camp safe.


Part 3.

Next... The cabins are a safe and friendly place too. You can sleep in there and they are really really comfortable. I really want to sleep on that bed right now. You can do things in there like get dressed and unpack, but better yet they are bunk beds. Some of the people come in and check on you.

I have provided efficient evidence that El Rancho is a safe and friendly place. 
I know I am going to El rancho again. 



















Feed back: it is good I think you should work on getting more details.






Thursday, 17 March 2016

El rancho camp

We went to camp on Tuesday. But sadly we left on Friday.
We did lots of activities like kayak, mini golf and horse riding.
We had to write in our camp books near bed time.
Walt: Building more Relationships...








Wednesday, 16 March 2016

Map

We had to create a map and put little pictures on it and do the key.
We could create it on our iPads or draw it. I am compering it with Directions, 
And no Directions. Here is the pictures...



Thursday, 3 March 2016

2 stars and a wish

This is my 2 stars and a wish. 
We had to use 2 stars for fished goals and a wish is what you need to work on.


I think I did fantastic.
I know I need a green...

Reading

In reading I have been doing hand writing, some other things.
I have been reading a book called once apono time. But we had to do a bullble map.

I think that I was good because I was doing it right.



Yay math

Rosie emailed me the math
 We have to do some of the things that are on it.

Walt: it was both for math and reading 

I think that I do good ing math because I learn new ways to do things in math a lot.

Okātia story

Walt: wirte the story on your words. 
We had to retell the story of Okātia with descriptive words and pictures.  

This is the story copied pony to here...

Plan
Juicy words.                                         
jealous
Huge large gigantic 
Curious 
Entertaining 
Furious  
Immediate
Furious.                                                                                     
Rage 
paranoid
He's jealous  
was bigger than anything he could imagine.
Suspicious
proud


Beginning 
A long long time ago before humans walked the land, there was a spirit and his name was Okātia. He became part of the tōtara tree. This tōtara tree was bigger and stronger than any other tree in the Puketoi forest. He thought that he was the best, the biggest thing in the world because he looked down at everything. His branches reached into the sky. As he towered over his neighbors he heard about Moana the gigantic, ginormous sea. When he could wait no longer he pulled and pulled until his roots came up. He fell on his side and started to roll through the forest, collecting dirt, stones and small ferns. As he was tumbling down the hill destroying Tanes beautiful forest, he made Tane annoyed with him.
Middle 
Okātia destroyed everything in his path. He took a breath and looked around.  Immediately he knew he was near the towering hills. A  gigantic rocky wall was right in Okātia’s way. He was still dizzy from rolling over hills and rocks. He hit the wall with his trunk, he did it multiple times but the wall didn't budge. He did it again but nothing happened. But on the third try he crashed the rocky wall with all his might. It started to crack shaking the ground like a earthquake. Almost frighten to death, he slipped falling through the crack and used all of his might to pull himself up.  

End
Okatia came out of the rocky gorge and rolled onto Foxton beach. He was so tired. His branches snapped off. Now he looked like a new growing tree. He didn't look mighty or muscular anymore. Okatia crashed and smashed  into the sea.  The water tasted like nothing he had ever tasted before. He thought that must have been the sea. It tasted like sour and rotten plums. The waves crashed over him immediately and tore his branches off. The ocean carried him far far away and no one ever found him again. 



Plan
Juicy words.                                         
jealous
Huge large gigantic 
Curious 
Entertaining 
Furious  
Immediate
Furious.                                                                                     
Rage 
paranoid
He's jealous  
was bigger than anything he could imagine.
Suspicious
proud


Beginning 
A long long time ago before humans walked the land, there was a spirit and his name was Okātia. He became part of the tōtara tree. This tōtara tree was bigger and stronger than any other tree in the Puketoi forest. He thought that he was the best, the biggest thing in the world because he looked down at everything. His branches reached into the sky. As he towered over his neighbors he heard about Moana the gigantic, ginormous sea. When he could wait no longer he pulled and pulled until his roots came up. He fell on his side and started to roll through the forest, collecting dirt, stones and small ferns. As he was tumbling down the hill destroying Tanes beautiful forest, he made Tane annoyed with him.
Middle 
Okātia destroyed everything in his path. He took a breath and looked around.  Immediately he knew he was near the towering hills. A  gigantic rocky wall was right in Okātia’s way. He was still dizzy from rolling over hills and rocks. He hit the wall with his trunk, he did it multiple times but the wall didn't budge. He did it again but nothing happened. But on the third try he crashed the rocky wall with all his might. It started to crack shaking the ground like a earthquake. Almost frighten to death, he slipped falling through the crack and used all of his might to pull himself up.  

End
Okatia came out of the rocky gorge and rolled onto Foxton beach. He was so tired. His branches snapped off. Now he looked like a new growing tree. He didn't look mighty or muscular anymore. Okatia crashed and smashed  into the sea.  The water tasted like nothing he had ever tasted before. He thought that must have been the sea. It tasted like sour and rotten plums. The waves crashed over him immediately and tore his branches off. The ocean carried him far far away and no one ever found him again. 
If think that We get  a green because my group worked together 
And that we found fun out of it.